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PartⅠ Error Correction(15 points)

Directions: This part consists of a short paragraph, which is extracted from a research paper. In this paragraph, there are altogether 10 mistakes in terms of tense and voice. You are required to point out mistakes and correct them. (Necessary information is available)

Necessary Information:

Tittle: Night Eating Syndrome in Young Adult Women: Prevalence and Correlates

Objective: The current study examined the prevalence and clinical significance of night eating syndrome (NES) in a community cohort of Black and White women.

National Growth and Health Study-Wave II (NGHS-Wave II), recruited women who previously participated in NGHS, a multicenter, 10- year study of risk factors for cardiovascular disease (a full description of the recruitment process was available in Striegel-More et al, 2003).

National Growth and Health Study-Wave II (NGHS-Wave II), recruited women who previously had participated in NGHS, a multicenter, 10- year study of risk factors for cardiovascular disease (a full description of the recruitment process is available in Striegel-More et al, 2003).

The NGHS centers contracted with all participants in the NGHS (1,209Blavk girls and 1,166 White girls, ages 9 or ten at study entry) by mail, and gave them an explanation of the new study. The NGHS centers then contracted the participants by telephone, describing the study in more detail to obtain informed consent.

All participants in the NGHS (1,209Blavk girls and 1,166 White girls, ages 9 or ten at study entry) were contracted by mail, and given an explanation of the new study. The NGHS centers then contracted the participants by telephone, describing the study in more detail to obtain informed consent.

A total of 2.051 women (89%) has consented to participate in the NGHS-Wave II (988 White women, 1,063 Black women) because the measure of NES is added late to the NGHS-Wave II protocol, only women (n=1,683) who has not yet been assed were asked to provide data regarding night eating and 1,344 women (79.9%) has completed the night eating questionnaire.

A total of 2.051 women (89%) consented to participate in the NGHS-Wave II (988 White women, 1,063 Black women) because the measure of NES was added late to the NGHS-Wave II protocol, only women (n=1,683) who had not yet been assed were asked to provide data regarding night eating and 1,344 women (79.9%) completed the night eating questionnaire.

In addition, the center has excluded 3 individuals from the analysis due to miss demographic information, resulting in a total of 1,341 women for the current report.

In addition, 3 individuals were excluded from the analysis due to missing demographic information, resulting in a total of 1,341 women for the current report.

The key to error correction

National Growth and Health Study-Wave II (NGHS-Wave II), recruited women who previously had participated in NGHS, a multicenter, 10- year study of risk factors for cardiovascular disease (a full description of the recruitment process is available in Striegel-More et al, 2003). All participants in the NGHS (1,209Blavk girls and 1,166 White girls, ages 9 or ten at study entry) were contracted by mail, and given an explanation of the new study. The NGHS centers then contracted the participants by telephone, describing the study in more detail to obtain informed consent. A total of 2.051 women (89%) consented to participate in the NGHS-Wave II (988 White women, 1,063 Black women)

because the measure of NES was added late to the NGHS-Wave II protocol, only women (n=1,683) who had not yet been assed were asked to provide data regarding night eating and 1,344 women (79.9%) completed the night eating questionnaire. In addition, 3 individuals were excluded from the analysis due to missing demographic information, resulting in a total of 1,341 women for the current report.