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English writing ----A Letter of acknowledgement
咸阳市乾县一中 胡亚群
Teaching Aims
1. To learn how to write Thank-you letters. 2. To master the skills of practical writing.
3. To have the awareness of giving thanks in the future life. Teaching Important Point
Help the students to write a passage of giving thanks. Teaching Difficult Point
How to enable the students to write the passage well by instruction? Teaching Procedure
Step1 Revision and leading in Introduction and discussion 感谢信开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for... I am writing to express my thanks for...
I am writing to show my sincere appreciation for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really don't know how to thank you enough for your help.
感谢信结尾段常用句式和套话
I must thank you again for your generous help. I am most grateful for your selfless donation. My true gratitude is beyond the word's description. I feel most obliged to thank you once more. Please accept my gratitude, now and always.
Step2 Pre-writing
【题目要求】
假如你是李华,上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动,并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信,内容包括:
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1. 感谢Kelly的帮助,你在交流活动中的收获很大; 2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子; 3. 感谢她送你的英文词典。 注意:
1. 适当增加细节使行文连贯。 2. 全文100词左右。 第一步:细审题、三确定
1.确定体裁:本文为 文。
2.确定人称: 本文的主要人称应为第 人称为主,第 人称为辅。 3.确定时态:本文主要时态应以 时态为主, 时态为辅。 第二步:拟要点,列提纲 开头:写信的目的
主体:美好回忆、交流收获、表示感谢 结尾:表示欢迎
第三步:依提纲、准翻译 开头:写信目的
要点一:感谢你在我待在英国期间对我的巨大的帮助。 During my stay in England. 主体:美好回忆,交流收获、表示感谢
要点二:上周,我参加了文化交流周,在你们国家,我玩得很开心。
Last week, I the Cultural Exchange Week .I in your country.
要点三:因为我参观了城市博物馆和一些名胜,所以我对英国的社会、文化和历史有了更好的了解。
the English society, culture and history because we visited the city museum and some places of interest. 要点四:能住在你家我很幸运。
I was so lucky that I 要点五:在这里我尤其要感谢你作为礼物送给我的词典
Here I especially thank you for 要点六:学好英语对我很有帮助
To learn English well 结尾:表示欢迎
要点七:有空欢迎你来中国!
when you are free. 第四步:句升级,求靓丽
句式升级一:用定语从句改写要点三的句子
句式升级二:用enough改写要点四的句子
句式升级三:用it作形式主语改写要点六的句子
句式升级四:用convenient改写要点七的句子
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Stept 3 Writing
写作模板
Dear ﹍﹍,How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to thank you for your ﹍﹍﹍﹍./ Thanks for your ﹍﹍﹍﹍. During ﹍﹍﹍, you ﹍﹍﹍. First, you ﹍﹍﹍.What’s more, you ﹍﹍﹍. Another thing that I can’t forget is that you ﹍﹍﹍./ There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is ﹍﹍﹍.
Thank you/ Thanks a lot for your kindness again.
Best wishes./ Give my best regard to ﹍﹍﹍. Yours sincerely﹍﹍﹍
第五步:巧连接,顺成文 Dear Kelly,
I have been back home (safe) from England. I am writing to thank you for (you) great help my stay in England.
Last week, I (participate) in the Cultural Exchange Week and I
enjoyed myself In your country. We visited the city museum and some (place) of interest , made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was (luck) enough to stay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together.
Here I (especial) thank you for the dictionary you offered me a gift. It’s a great help for me (learn) English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
I (sincere) invite you to come to china if it is convenient for you! I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
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