高考英语作文作文指导与训练—倡议书

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高考英语话题作文指导与训练——倡议书(Proposal

倡议书由个人或集体发出,作用是倡导某项活动。倡议书遵循书信的一般格式,但由于用途和作用的差异,在许多细微之处各不相同。

【例题展示】

北京某中学讨论是否应该骑车上学。假如你是该校学生会主席,请你用英语写一封倡议书,号召同学们骑自行车上学。内容需包括:

1.建议骑自行车上学;

2.自行车是学生常用交通工具; 3.骑自行车的一些好处; 4.骑自行车需注意的问题。 注意:

1. 词数100左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数) 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 Dear schoolmates, Recently, a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school._____________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The Students’ Union

July 13, 2011

【思路点拨】

1. 从写作内容上来说,一般倡议书中应该包括倡议原因、目的、具体内容和要求等。该写作内容包括 (1)观点:骑车上学回家。(to and from school) (2)原因:骑车大众化;好处。(common, easy and convenient) (3)注意问题: 安全。(keep a/an…speed; lock) (4) 建议。(Don’t hesitate ; Let’s ride…)

2. 从写作手法上来说,倡议书的措辞要贴切,情感要真挚,语言要富于号召性,可多shouldought tomaycan等表示建议的情态动词;倡议书的篇幅不宜过长,开头要简单明了,吸引同学们的注意,结尾最好加上简洁有力的呼吁。

3. 从谋篇布局来说,倡议书写格式和一般书信大致相同,一般由称呼、正文、结尾、落款四部分组成,有些倡议书还根据需要加是了适当的标题。

1)称呼。写称呼的目的是为了明确倡议的对象,一般要依据倡议的对象而选用适当的称呼,如:“Dear friends”“Dear schoolmates”“Dear editor”“Dear students”等。

2)正文。倡议意在引起他人的响应,这就要求作者须清楚说明倡议背景、原因,申明倡议目的,做到让人信服,人们才能响应并自觉行动。倡议的内容也要具体,要写明有什么作用。一般倡议的内容可为几点来写的,这样倡议的对象更容易看清,更容易明白,效果也更好。

3)结尾。结尾可表明倡议者的决心和希望或者提出某种建议,但是一般不在结尾用些表示敬意或祝愿的话。

4)落款。在右下方署名发出倡议的集体或倡议者的姓名,然后另起一行,署上发出倡议时间。

范文展示】

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飞扬英语之写作系列 讲练结合,步步提升 Dear schoolmates, Recently, a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school. As far as I am concerned, we should ride to and from school. Firstly, riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot. Next, sparking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school, no matter how busy the traffic could be. Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it. In this way, you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here. Don’t hesitate, everybody. Let’s ride to school.

The Students’ Union June 13, 2011

【习作点评】

短文较全面地反应了作者的语言组织能力、书面表达能力,以及思维能力。文中注意了上下文的连贯性,能有效地使用语句间的连接成份,使全文结构紧凑;同时文中也运用了较高级的词汇及语言结构,增强了文章的可读性。Firstly…Next…Actually…also…In this way…让文章浑然一体。②As far as I am concerned就我个人而言;…for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lotfor用做并列连词表示原因 …no matter how busy the traffic could be no matter how引导让步状语从句;What you should do carefully what引导主语从句,以上从句的灵活运用,表现作者的语言功底。③省略句while riding以及it做做形式定语,进一步丰富了文章的语言结构。④同时,文中也正确地运用了一些好词汇及短语,如:convenient, practical, appropriate, hesitate等。

【实战演练】

为了有一个美好的校园环境,请你代表学生会向全校发出倡议。要求内容包括以下要点并阐述你的理由。 1. 别乱扔垃圾,爱护花草树木;2. 不得高声喧哗;3. 循环使用资料 4.保持教室整洁。 注意:1.词数120左右; 2. 注意文章连贯性。

【参考范文

Dear friends,

Do you want to study in a beautiful campus? So it is our duty to make our school comfortable to study in. To complete this task, we should keep the following rules in mind. First of all, don’t litter about in our school. It’s smelly and attracts flies, you know. And we should protect our school’s environment by looking after flowers and trees around. Of course, don’t yell or shout out so that we can study in a quiet environment. It’s also suggested that we should reuse everything recyclable, which is money-saving and environmentally friendly. Finally, please keep classrooms clean, use the blackboard responsibly and remember there is no drinking or eating in the classrooms. Let’s all take action now and contribute to building a harmonious environment.

Thank you!

The Students’ Union

July 1, 2012



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【经典例句】

1. Please don’t smoke, spit or litter in public places.

2. Let’s make a good network environment. Let’s be civilized Netizen.

3. Hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.

4. We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things. 5. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.

6. We students should listen more to our classmates, thus we will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

7. It is a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise, for taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.

8. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.



【妙思巧练】

根据汉语提示完成句子

1. We should ________ (保持平衡饮食). For dinner, we’d better not eat too much.

2. As a student, I am _______ (强烈支持) the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. 3. Let’s all_______ (采取行动) now and contribute to the prosperity of our motherthe earth. 4. It's a pleasure to thank you and let you know, too, your kindness __________ (长久被铭记). 5. To do a lot for our environment, we should try to use both sides of paper _______ (一有可能). 6. We should develop _________ (良好生活态度), for life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.

7. It is obligatory that books borrowed from the library should be returned _______ (两周内). 8. In order to _______ (充分利用) learning materials, the Students’ Union of our school is organizing an instructive activity.

【答案】

1. keep a balanced diet 2. strongly for 3. take action 4. will be long remembered 5. whenever (it is)possible 6. a good attitude to life 7. within two weeks 8. make the best use of

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