高分作文秘诀之十五

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高分作文秘诀

高分作文秘诀之一：使用正确的时态。例如：

1. A big fire destroy the forest which belong to the villagers. 1. A big fire destroyed the forest which belonged to the villagers. 1. A big fire destroyed the forest belonging to the villagers. 2. The village changed greatly since he left his hometown. 2. The village has changed greatly since he left his hometown. 3. Nancy had promised to come tonight. 3. Nancy promised to come tonight. 4. So I write to apply for the job.

4 So I am writing to apply for the job.

高分作文秘诀之二：使用正确的时态。例如：

1.This room is measured 30 feet long and 25 feet wide. 1.This room measures 30 feet long and 25 feet wide.

2. The apartment is consisted of two rooms and a kitchen. 2. The apartment consists of two rooms and a kitchen.

3. This city has rapidly been developed into an industrial center. 3. This city has rapidly developed into an industrial center. 4. A big fire was broken out in the factory last night. 4. A big fire broke out in the factory last night.

高分作文秘诀之三：使用一般现在时时，不要忘记单数第三人称动词要加s。例如： 1. Her father forbid her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies. 1. Her father forbids her to watch TV because he is afraid that it will affect her studies. 2. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develop your interests. 2. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops your interests.

高分作文秘诀之四：正确使用形容词和副词。例如： 1. He very likes playing computer games.

1. He likes playing computer games very much. 2. You can’t imagine how wonderful she sings. 2. You can’t imagine how wonderfully she sings.

3. The roads became smooth because of the rain in the morning. 3. The roads became slippery because of the rain in the morning. 4. The tea tastes a bit strangely. 4. The tea tastes a bit strangely.

高分作文秘诀之五：避免使用汉语式英语。例如：

1. Have 60% students think an entrance fee shouldn’t be received. 1. 60% of the students think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.

1. There are 60% of the students who think an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged. 1. There are 60% of the students thinking an entrance fee shouldn’t be charged.


2. His friends are few. 2. He has few friends.

3. Recently our village has taken place great changes. 3. Recently great changes have taken place in our village. 4. Welcome you to visit our school. 4. You are welcome to visit our school.

5. Today I visited the Smiths--- my first time visit to an American family. 5. Today I visited the Smiths--- my first visit to an American family.

高分作文秘诀之六：避免出现句子的结构性错误。例如： 1. There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 1. Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.

1. There are twenty students in our class who have been to Beijing. 2. Many of the students against the plan. 2. Many of the students are against the plan.

3. Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 3. Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.

高分作文秘诀之七：使用较高级词汇。例如： 1. My English is getting better and better. 1. My English is improving.

2. We are seeing more and more cars on the roads.

2. We are seeing an increasing number of cars on the roads. 3. The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

3. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

高分作文秘诀之八：使用较复杂句式。例如： 1. She is a girl, she is 15 years old. 1. She is a girl aged 15.

2. Last winter holiday I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandma. 2. My father and I spent our last winter holiday in the countryside, visiting my grandma. 3. We hadn’t been there for many years and were greatly surprised at the changes. 3. As we hadn’t been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes. 3. Not having been there for many years, we were greatly surprised at the changes. 4. I passed my driving test. This surprised my father. 4. I passed my driving test, which surprised my father. 体会下列句子的句式结构：

1. We should try to make proper use of the computer, making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.

2. Being absorbed in the game, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves, leaving their homework undone.

3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.

高分作文秘诀之九：使用恰当的过渡语。例如：


1. 表示转折关系的过度语：but, however, nevertheless on the contrary, on the other hand 2. 表示递进关系的过度语：in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, what’s more, What’s worse, to make matters worse, the most important of all, worst of all, especially, in particular, on top of all,

3. 表示结果关系的过度语：therefore, thus, consequently, as a result, that’s why…

4. 表示顺序关系的过度语：firstly, secondly, thirdly, meanwhile lastly/finally/eventually, last but not the least, to begin with, after that,

5. 表示总结的过度语：in conclusion, in brief, in short, in a word, on the whole, to sum up 6. 表示个人观点的过度语：in my opinion, as far as I’m concerned, personally, as for me, to be frank

7. 表示他人观点的过度语：It is widely accepted that…; A commonly held idea is that…; It is taken for granted that…

高分作文秘诀之十：避免重复使用同一单词或短语。例如：

1. There are many people who speak English, so after learning English, you can communicate with them easily.

1. There are many people who speak English, so after learning the language, you can communicate with them easily.

2. I like reading while my brother likes watching television. 2. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

3. In my hometown a new railway is being built and a power station is going to be built

next year.

3. In my hometown a new railway is under construction and a power station is going to be

built next year.

4. TV has a great influence on children and it also has a great influence on adults. 4. TV has a great influence on children as well as on adults.

高分作文秘诀之十一：句子结构要多样化。例如：

1. There is a teaching building on the left side of the school. There is a library on the right. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. There is a new playground in front of the school.

1. Entering the school, you’ll find a teaching building on it’s left side. There is a library standing on the right, in which books, newspapers and magazines are stored. In front of the school lies a new playground.

2. I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning. 2. Your letter of August 15th reached me this morning. 3. We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3. How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

高分作文秘诀之十二：使用正确的标点符号。例如：

1. I believe with my hard work my dream to become a biologist will come true. 1. I believe, with my hard work, my dream to become a biologist will come true. 2. Although I am good at maths. I like English very much. 2. Although I am good at maths, I like English very much.

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